Poem: Thoughts on it please?

Question:

Poem: Thoughts on it please?

I see you and my stomach tingles
I try my hardest to not look
But I can't help it
My thoughts are of you
and what could happen
When I dream youre there
Then the hope the someday
My dreams will come true
When I'm awake I know they wont
I know I'm making myslef miserable
But love or like
I can't choose

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4 months ago
Its not SUPPOSED to rhyme

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think that this poem is great. It has great intelectuality and integrety. And if this poem is based on your real life i think that u should go for it =P . Just a thought for u. But anyways u did a really good job on it