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Aura of the Rose


A single red rose rests upon a grand piano, relishing in its own delicate beauty. The room contains no walls, its boundaries are limitless. A rich, midnight black is present throughout the atmosphere. Though the room exists boundless, the rose possesses a divine aura which blossoms in the eyes of many. It signifies a vast number of things; Loneliness..Hope...Romance..So... Yet, somewhere, with all its meanings, lies a hushed heavenly elegance.



(Please be honest with your constructive criticism)

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4 months ago
READ BEFORE CRITIQUE: Sorry, after "romance.." it should be "solitude" NOT "so.."

4 months ago
No.. I'm not a professional writer... (I'm 14)

I don't plan to go into this profession, but writing will always be something I am very ardent about.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Beautiful description. The lush enviroment of a single room, stretching for eternity, with a piano and a single rose. I hope that you are a proffesional writer, because if not, you should definitely try that career out.