I'm 17 what do you think of this poem i wrote, i know that's depressing,but is i

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I'm 17 what do you think of this poem i wrote, i know that's depressing,but is it any good? be honest please!!

"my voice is but a whisper
as i'm calling out to you.
i'm quickly sinking deeper,
and i just don't know what to do.
the pain runs deep,
my heart can't last;
time's running out--
i'm falling fast.
please save me now,
before it's too late.
i feel death pulling me,
and it just won't wait.
i'm just a kid,
and life is hard.
some people make it,
but i'm broken and scarred.
i fell quite fast,
my time is through.
you just couldn't hear me,
as i called out to you.
there were always other things
more important than me.
i was falling so fast,
but you never could see.
i was the girl you ignored,
who had problems, then died.
but what you will never know
was that it was suicide.
all i needed was someone,
just someone to get me through.
but you just couldn't hear me,

As I Cried Out To You......."

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You know what? You have a lot of talent. I would love to see what
you could do with an upbeat subject. I have such love in my heart for a family member who is dying. I have always been the one in
my family to support others, tho I am the youngest. I try to take care of others in my way, but you, you have the talent to write
poetry. Write another, ok?