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Poem!!?? I need help finishing it!! Only four more lines?

have 6 lines to a ten line poem i only need two more but they must have end rhymes and have imagery appealing to sight and sound and im stuck. heres what i have so far:
The school is like a jungle...........................
The sun seeps down through windows high in the leaves...............
It's warm rays stealing the cold like theives..........................
Trees with locks line what to the eye are never ending trails............
About every 42 minutes the exotic birds' chirps ring it never fails....
1 I
2 Need
3 Help
4 Here
This is only for a ninth grade english class so dont tell me how bad it is or critize me. I need imagery too 3 for sight i think i already have one i need 3 for sound i think i already have 1 for that too but im not sure i need help there too


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

A dog in the distance has an incessant bark
Black clouds roll by making the day go dark
The sun breaks back through shedding its light
Piercing the gloom with a shimmering bright

Don't know if this will help you and your poems fine kid.