Question:
Give your honest opinion about this poem?
As I live day by day
I look back on my past
Can I move on;
Can I keep my head held high;
Will I ever try to start over,
Or will I forever wonder why;
Did I deserve what happened to me;
Was it to open my eyes so I can see
That time is running out
Is it to realize that I need something that I can't live without;
Will I change,
Or will I stay the same,
Will I still be going through my growing pains
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
sounds a frank genuine introspection. I wonder why you do not use conventional punctuation marks!
Can. . . . . (suppose you used "should")?
consider these marks
....past:
.....move on!
.....high!
.....over,
........wonder, Why?
*start all over again; was it meant to; so I could see; That time WAS; Was it to...couldn't live without?
Will I change
Or will I remain (not stay!) the same!!
a period at the end: ........pains.
Quite a moving poem after some traumatic experience. I have been asking similar questions introspectively since I lost my beloved.