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Question: Please help title my short story!?
The story is about racial prejudices and how 2 teenage girls over come it!.

One girl is white and the other is black!. They accidentally bump into each other at the zoo and start arguing!. Soon a crowd of other teens forms and they choose sides based on their own race and everyone is arguing!. Security makes everyone leave!.

Later that night, the 2 teens meet again at the bus stop and they silently hate each other!. Then a man comes along and starts to mug the white girl!. I don't know what sort of man yet!. Either he is homeless, or he is a gangster!.!.!. he is just some sort of scary man!. The black girl tries to escape but he corners her too and starts to mug her too!. The 2 girls have to join forces to save themselves and each other from the scary man!.

At the end of the story they are friends and they no longer are racially prejudiced!.

I appreciate any input so please tell me any suggestions!. I really need help!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A title says a lot about a story!. Ultimately, only you can pick the title for this!. You know what you are trying to convey by telling it!.

You might want to try titles that provide contrast, since you have a white vs!. black theme!. You could use something based on zebras, since it is in a zoo and that incorporates those colors!. You might also want to play up the animal relation, because the fight that breaks out sounds very primal!.

Another angle would be to focus on the man!. Since he really provides the crux of the story, the title would relate well!. No matter which angle you choose when picking a title, I'd suggest you finish the story first!. Figure out what type of man mugs them!. Then, once it's complete, pick a title!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The reluctant zebra

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