Poetry writer's are you familiar with, a sophisticated writing style? What d

Question: Poetry writer's are you familiar with, a sophisticated writing style!? What does that mean to you!?

A poetry submission was rejected stating, "All important story elements are here, they just need to be developed, a more sophisticated writing style!. You have wonderful potential"!. I am willing to learn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

By sophisticated style, I think of good use of:

Language (rich vocabulary)
Imagery (draw the reader in with a picture in words)
Stream of consciousness (thought processes)
and last but not least - Theme (message about life)

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If you include your entry, I would find it easier to discern what the writer of that statement meant!.

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