This is for school!. I'm 14 in 9th grade!. It has to be about nature!. Could you play teacher and leave any side notes on what you would change or add!? Thank you and BEST answer will be given!
Oh how the peaceful forest rests,
Under a spell, an enchantment of tunes,
As the trees creek softly back and forth,
And the mocking bird sings it sweet song,
As the pure blanket of snow covers the forest whole,
With a windy chill and gentle flow,
The cotton snow continues to peacefully blow,
Gently tucking in upon the earth,
Falling as if angels’ feathers from heaven above,
Virgin territory,
Fresh and pure,
Untouched and beautiful,
No soul dare touch,
So delicate and fresh,
Like a diamond in the rough,
Light streams round about,
Bursting through the sleepy tree branches,
Sparkling like the far stretched seas,
Glistening like a little one’s deep blue eyes,
Yet gentle and rich, like a brown eyed dream,
For as early as the hunter may rise,
Guilt is sure to be on his mind,
For that first step he takes upon sacred ground,
Is a step into a sense of enchantment,
Like dream,
Peaceful and clear,
Yet somehow in a daze!.Www@QuestionHome@Com