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Question: Does this sound like a gd story to you!?
Ive been wanting to read a book about music not boigraphy or lessons but a fiction book on music like a story havent been able to find one so i thought may aswell write one myself and i am pretty good at writing stories!. So heres what ive thought of so far and i am a drummer so that would help a little bit!.
A boy ages about 13 finds life hard getting on with kids at school you know gettign bullied and stuff!. His parents noticing his downfall in his end of term school grade decide he should have some sort of recreation!. They decide to take him to a music shop and see wheather he would like to play an instrument!. He picks as what i did the drums and his parents quickly introduce him to lessons where he meets 3 other kids the same age as him, after a few months of playing and practising he and the 3 other kids he meets make a band called Unknown Artist (My bands name) one of the kids dads has a recording studio at his work rfter some work the make up a few songs record them!. While doing so they also have some gigs at some local caffees and pubs one night they r doin a gig while someone from the music industry notices them goes to his boss and tells him they are pretty good and worth the trouble!. He manages them a year later after watching them befoe them they have released an album played it on the radio and people know about them!. They are about to go big time!.
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Most good stories have twists in the plot!. A love story mixed in is also good!. I would mix in a romantic interest (he falls in love with a girl he meets, but maybe after getting this offer to go big time he has to make a choice about staying with her, or leaving)!. Or you can mix a tragedy, like a car accident and the drummer loses an arm, or something!. Of course, we all like happy endings, so it has to come full circle!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think it's a great idea for a book!.You are going to have to dig into each boys life and make it something that every person can find a part of themselves in!.If you find the right twist,it will be a success!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think it's moving too fast,
the whole book is like done in a paragragh
maybe some conflict or something
xo,,Www@QuestionHome@Com
sounds like a zoe 101 episode lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
thats a great story!. but im just wonderin, when the boy takes the drum lessons with 3 other boys, wouldnt they all be playing the drums!? so when they make a band, its like a drumming band!? or is it a band where one person plays the drums!.!. another sings!.!. another is on guitar and another is on the keyboard etc!.!.!.!?
yeah, i got a bit confused on that bit!. but it was great!!
p!.s!. if you want, you can involve some chicks at the pubs lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
It's not too bad!. But a question, why would a recording studio just be randomly at someones work!? Unless they work at some huge studio, and if the kid's father does have a studio at his work that suggests he is earning quite a bit of money; so why would the kid be slumming it when kids these days who have money are popular compared to those who don't!? Otherwise it's great, good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
sounds good, if it was me I would add one of the band members is a girl and that the two guys both fall in LOve with her!. they have a fight and then all most brake up!. but her girl has a secret crush one the one who lost, and she can sing and write also, and she joins the band,and u can add some stuff about one of the parents being a butt head 'cause they don't want their kid wasting his life on a pipe dream, or one is a frustated singer who didn't make it and try to take over the band, just some ideas pretty good story, Write it!Www@QuestionHome@Com