Would you read this book if this was the first paragraph or back cover said this

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We met on the 18th of May, I don't really remember him!. It wasn't a huge party, maybe 50-60 people, but everyone wanted to talk to me!. I was the 15 year old pregnant girl!. I was the center of the party, and i was loving it!. I didn't care what people thought of me anymore, all i know was i wanted this baby, possibly more than anything!. I was having the time of my life waiting for this baby, everything was fine as long as my parents didn't find out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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yes i would most definitely read this!! you already have me hooked :) like you said, there does need to be more details about the "mysterious guy"!.!.!.!.!.
let me know if you do finish writing it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow seriously I read the first sentence and I am already intrigued!. As you already added you will need to continue with more details about the guy because the book would be hugely based on him!.
It seems like this story could really lift off it you further developed the plot and maybe added if it was true or not (something the readers could relate to)!.
The first person narrative is also a great idea because it makes the reader become emotionally invested in the main character and the situation at hand!.
Overall interesting start and good luck :)
ps let me know if u finish it or even a few chapters, sounds really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Honestly!? I don't like it and I wouldn't read it!.
It's a bit confusing how you start talking about some guy but then the rest of the paragraph is about you and the baby!. What does the guy have to do with any of that!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it sounds pretty interesting!. i would read it!. And when you get the rest of it written don't forget to send me a copy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've never been at a party where the pregnant girl was the life and soul!.
To be honest I'm pretty anti-pregnant-teen-party!.
So!.!.!. No, I wouldn't read it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I must say, I am curious to find out what happened!. But I have a tremendously long reading list, so this would have to wait!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeah it sounds pretty interesting actually!.Www@QuestionHome@Com