I've asked something like this before, but that was when I KNEW my writing was horrible!. I'd like to ask the good people of YA to review my writing again (Please don't review the grammar I have a guy for that)
Xeric was now inside of the castle, outside of the bar; at which Xerin was in!. Xeric spaced into the castle noticing all of it’s features, such as the stone pillars all over the main room; and the maids coming into the rooms of filthy rich men!. From what Xeric saw, the maid would take some money from the man then walk into the room; the door would shut after that!.
Xeric was no idiot, however he knew perfectly well that those ‘maids’ were looking for a tip from the hard work inside the room!. They were whores, so to speak!. Most whores would, however, only do that because they have too, they have no other way of living, expect for thievery, but that was risky!. More risky to steal money from men’s pockets; then to, exchange for it!.
However, most maids don’t need more money, they could sure use it, but they wouldn’t die without it!. So in other words, this maid that Xeric is seeing is not too ashamed of being a hooker!.
Though Xeric had no time to ponder on such thoughts, he must have to do something, he’s in one of the most important jobs a man in Raptus has to do!. Even though Xeric was really just a Ginny pig for Reda, it made him famous, rich, and powerful; and that was all a man, woman, or child would ever want in his or her life!. So it is worth it, that just make Xeric have all of those things, without doing what the job said for him to do!.
As Xeric walked through the halls of the giant castle, at which, he was in; Xeric noticed the room Reda told him and Xerin to get out of!. He stepped closer to the door, then put his ear next to it to hear what was inside!.
“So what do you say!? You have nothing to lose, but everything to gain” asked a man, Xeric could not identify the voice!.
“It‘s a intrusting plan, but what if I‘m caught!?” asked, by what Xeric could identify, Reda!.
“Get caught!?” asked the man!.
“Yes, you‘d be surprised at how many times stuff like this never work” replied Reda!.
“Well the only way you‘d be caught is if I got caught and told them it was your ideal”
Xeric felt a tickling on his nose, he was about to sneeze, and he couldn’t get away in time!. By the time Reda replied “You have a po—” Xeric sneezed!. This stopped the conversation!.
Xeric ran away as fast as he could, by the time he was about to turn from a hall the door opened!. Xeric knew this because he heard the door shut!. Then after that, heard Dethe’s voice!. He got too far away to hear what they were going to say; all he worried about now is that they don’t catch him!.Www@QuestionHome@Com