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Question: Is this a good Christian poem!?
How Much More Does He Love Us

Is the ant so small,
The Father does not see,
Every struggle that it has,
And every breath it breaths!.

Is the sparrow so worthless,
That the Father’s ear does not ring,
With the sound of its song,
Every time it sings!.

So meaningless the butterfly,
That the Father took His time,
To paint pictures on its wings,
With colors so divine!.

So delicate the flower,
That the Father did not touch,
And give it such a fragrance,
A fragrance from above!.

Is the sea so vast,
That the Father could not fill,
With all aquatic creatures,
Every fish and every whale!.

Is the earth just dirt,
That the Father set inside,
The most beautiful of diamonds,
And jewels of every kind!.

If in His form He made it,
Then breathed life into the dust,
If man then looks like Him,
How much more does he love us!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it is realy cool, and pretty, but i think there should be a question mark at the ebd of every verse, otherwise it sounds like He doesnt love us!.

but i love your rhyming, this peom is awsome, ill definetly look at more, it just sounds a little controversy without question marksWww@QuestionHome@Com

On the surface, it sounds fine!.

But if you really read into it, you ask questions that are never answered or tied in at the end!.

One error: "And every breath it breaths!." is wrong!. It should be - "And every breath it breathes!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's beautiful and true!. i love to read praises to God for all of his goodness and creation and love!Www@QuestionHome@Com