Does anyone want to seriously review my 1st and 2nd chapter?

Question: Does anyone want to seriously review my 1st and 2nd chapter!?

I just finished the first chapter of my book and I'm starting on the second one!. Does anyone want to seriously review and maybe help edit the two chapter!? I think the book will be a big success when it's done!. So who wants to seriously review and tell me about the chapters and what you think!? Answer with your email address with a little note and I'll email it to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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ya sure i'd love to! Just go to my page and it's got my email! Maybe we could exchange because i'm just starting the first chapter of my story and i would love if you could give me some feedback!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I use family to test out my books, that way you don't have to risk passing your uncopyrighted idea over the internet!. Maybe you should try that but always ask them to critisice because otherwise they'll always say it's great!.
If you have an idea that hasn't been done before then take extra care of it theres nothing to stop someone taking it and passing it off as their own!.
If you want my advice just carry on working on the book, editing and proof reading are best left for when its finished or when you get writers block and want to get a feel for the story again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I'd like to review them for you - not that I'm some literary genius, though, I'm only thirteen, but I myself have written about two chapters so we could have a little exchange!. Trouble is, mine's on a different computer that I can't access at the minute!. Please send it to this address: karlkdmwwe@aol!.com,
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I don't mind!. Email me at millymarieadams@yahoo!.com!. I'm 22 and I have an English lit degree!. I hope your book will become a sucess in the future!

Hope I helped!

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Sure! I have time on me but it depends what kind of story it is!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com