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Question: My horror story Idea, Please read it!?
I was thinking of writing this story about these 2 sisters (there not twins by the way) go to a party and they have a great time, but after they leave, out of nowhere, one of the sister's gets punched in the face and knocked out in the parking lot and the other sister is gone as she's kidnapped by this sadistic serial killer that tortures young girls!. the sister that was knocked out, wakes up later in a medical center and recovers from her attack!. as she goes home to watch the news, because she has no clue were her sister is, so she watches the news on the tv and discovers that her sister has been kidnapped by this killer!. as she searched for this killer over the internet, she has seen all his sadistic stuff that he's done to other girl victims, he just likes torturing his girl victims because he thinks it's enjoyable to torture girls!. so the girl wants to get revenge and when she finds the killer, she will give him a taste of his own medicine and save her sister!. if its a good idea, then i need ideas for a story title!.
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it's not a bad idea, but is it REALLY realistic that after being with her sister when she was attacked that she would just saunter home and turn on the TV!? no, not really!.
Maybe have the police come to the medical center and question her about her attack and that's when she could find out her sister was taken!.
also, your killer will have to have a REAL reason for him to do the things he does!. Serial Killers usually don't just go around killing people because they have nothing better to do!. Usually it is something that has happened to them or around them in their childhood that affects them deeply!. Since he kills women and tortures them then it is most likely that it would be a woman that either did something to him or to someone really close to him when he was very young!. He would have a 'type' of women that he would go for like, blonde, short, green eyes, slight of build or something like that which would resemble the woman that hurt him so she could in essence become her replacement!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a bit overused, but if you can make it your own, then it could be very good!. Work with an editor or a teacher to help you make it your own!.
Okay!. Now!. Story titles!. I'm good at this stuff!. =)
Possibly:
1!. The Searcher
2!. In Search Of (Kidnapped girl's name)
3!. Enjoyment
4!. Where It All Begins
5!. (First girl) and (name of kidnapped girl) Ex: Mindy and Roberta
6!. Mind Games
7!. The Casanova
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no!. i think a better idea for a story is about the sock monster!. you know, teach kidsa healthy fear of socks and all that!.
but your idea is good too!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
I agree with "BeautyBlitz" ^^^Www@QuestionHome@Com
it would be better as a movie not a book =PWww@QuestionHome@Com