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Question: Can anyone help me with this book I'm writing!?
There's this one chapter in the book, where a boy brings his little brother to his job!. Near the end of his shift, a robber comes in, and the boy tries to get the gun from him, but accidentally pulls the trigger and shoots his brother!. I know, it's sad, but it causes for good drama!.

Anyway, he is trying to save his brother, and in the process, he is basically telling him how he wished he'd spent more time with him!.

After that, I really don't know where to go from there!. I know that his brother dies, and he gets interrogated for murdering his brother!. From the point when he's talking to his dying brother to when he's getting interrogated, I'm pretty much stuck!.

Can anyone help me where to go from there!? Thanks!!

P!.S!. Please don't comment on how morbid this is, or how I shouldn't use it in my book!. I know it's morbid, and very, very sad, and it makes me sad to read it, but I'm sticking with it!. So please don't say how I shouldn't use it!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
well if its a robbery the police are bound to show up, with the paramedics!. You could have the brother not quite done what he was saying to the little brother when the paramedics push him aside!. There will be a big scene trying to get him to calm down and because the police are there they will take him down town for questioning!. That's the way I see it anyway!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

He talks to the dying brother and after some time he breathes for the last time, he takes the body home, tells parents everything, they are not convinced, anyway it's a police case, they inform the law, the police takes the brother for interrogationWww@QuestionHome@Com

what about the rest of the family and their reaction!. Www@QuestionHome@Com