Does this seem like a good prologue to my story?

Question: Does this seem like a good prologue to my story!?

It's been a couple of months since i've last written a fictional story but since i have plenty of time on my hands now, i've decided to start one up again!. based on this prologue, would you want to read the rest of my story!? (lol i'm still working on it though)!. what do i need to change!? does it sound idiotic!?

http://www!.gaiaonline!.com/j/!?mode=view&p!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Wow!.!.!.I love it! A few misspellings, but very good overall!. You need to write some more of the story, you've really sparked my curiosity!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really like this, but does the first paragraph supposed to be with the second one, because I don't think it does!. I love how it starts through, it is very realistic and detailed good for you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

As a fellow author, I recommend you delete this question immediately!. Anyone could plagiarize your work right now! Have someone trusted read your prologue!. Plus, who's to say these people are credible at all!? They could give you bad advice!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think its good, and i agree, someone might plagarize!.!.!.im actually considering writing a book too! though im young!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I found a few mispelled words in there, but it seems to be good!. Www@QuestionHome@Com