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Question: Character name and small excerpt help!.!.!.!?
First here is an excerpt of my story!.!.!.

It was just another summer that I thought I’d spend stuck in Los Angles, California with my mother!. It would drag on and yet fly by at the same time!. They always did!. I was in no hurry to begin my senior year though!. I didn’t want to go back to school, I had never felt like I belonged there!. I had friends, of course, my best friend was Jade!. Jade was spunky and her brown hair, brown eyes and olive skin were a contrast to my blonde hair, blue eyes, and pale skin!. Complete opposites, our differences varying from the music we listened to, to the food we ate!. Jade was also tall and slender and I was small with a very petite frame!. The difference I seemed to notice the most though, was that guys were always falling for Jade!. She was a notorious heartbreaker and she hadn’t had a Friday night without a date since she was 13, unless of course I had made plans with her well in advance!. I however, had yet to captivate any boy to the extent of them asking me out!. That was what bothered me most about Jade, she seemed perfect!. She was every guys fantasy, and I, well I wasn’t!.

WHAT DO YOU THINK OF IT!?

And secondly, I want to name the girl [my main character] Kit!. I've always been fascinated with that name!. What do you think of it!?

also, there is a movie or a book or maybe both about a girl named "Kitt Kittredge", I think!. Are the names to relateable!?
For example, if you read the name Kit would you think of that movie or book!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
no, when i heard the name kit i imagined your story character, i really like the beginning i would read it It it became a bookWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it so far!. And it's funny that you mention Kit Kittredge, I've never seen the movie, but thats the first thing I thought of when I saw the name Kit!.

I like the name Kira!. !. !.just a thought, and best of luck! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

its a good story
i dont what you could name her i dont think kit fits but if you do then its okay i cant think of a name that would fit
id try and find something oppisite of the name jade as well
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I think that's good! It actually sounds a bit like me and one of my friends!.!.!.(me being the main character)
I think Kit would be a good name!. I didn't see the movie, but I have the Kit doll from when I was younger(she has blonde hair, and blue eyes, but other than that, they aren't similar)!. People might think of Kit Kittredge when they read your book though, so be weary of that!

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