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Question: Critique My Chapter!? Help Me Name It!?
I'm currently writing a story and I've just written one of the shortest chapters in the entire book!. It's currently chapter 23 and I need to figure out a chapter title!.!.!.
Demetria and Blythe are the main characters of the Sci-Fi story I'm writing!. It takes place 300 years after 2000 (So 2300)!.
Demetria is a hired assassin that Blythe fell in love with!. When he started his own aircraft team (Consisting of himself, Farron, Shinja, Leif, Dextra, Clovis) he naturally asked Demetria to join!. She agreed, and during several of their battles she's saved some of the members, but during their last fight with the Air Bulls, she said something into her communicator to the team leader, Puck, which was his offer to pay her for her protection!.

I've been told recently that the "Second half" of the chapter (Where is focuses mostly on Demetria and Blythe) is a bit vague, but it's only because the romance is more enhanced in previous chapters, so what they're saying is a bit of a recap of all they've been through!. I don’t just want title names—I would also like to hear your opinion of the chapter, please! I had that problem the first time I posted this!
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Really good! Call it "The Hardest Part!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's pretty good!.!.!.!. except the way he takes her leaving!.
I would've thought he would have responded hurt and angry that she was after all betraying them or w/e

Um!.!.!. i think a title like:
"Goodbye" or "Goodbyes"

something like that!.!.!. sorry best i can come up with

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