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Question: Will anyone like this story!?
Here's it is: (Though I will not get into too many details)

The story is a twist on the whole fantasy genre!. It chronicles the lives a royal dynasty, who for about 650 or so years have gained a fearsome renown as the producers of the greatest military strategists in the history of the entire continent!. (This is similar to Europe)

The story is set in the time when various countries were at war with each other and this particular family grew to nearly unbeatable power!. One of the main protagonists-a young prince who decides to use his brilliant mind to try to unite the warring countries under his rule and influence and attempt to establish an empire after getting fed up with "feeling weak", with the ongoing war, and with the current state of his world!. He inherits his family's talent in strategy, and uses various methods to bring down prominent figures and build his own military forces!.

The Prince’s greatest challenge is the another main protagonist, who is unknowingly the one person he feels is most precious to him…his younger sister-the Crown Princess, a fellow puppet master that hides under a “nom de guerre” and is just as skilled and talented-maybe even more so than he is and has the same identical goal of ending war but instead of building up power for herself, just decides to join various sides she feels has a more worthy cause and uses her strategic genius to win their war for them and end the bloodshed as quickly-and with as few casualties as possible!. She is the Prince’s rival strategist and constantly gets in the way of her brother’s conquests!. Both see each other to be a threat in achieving their goals-and both try to find each other’s identity (difficult since both are very careful of revealing their identities and ruining their plans) and eliminate each other once and for all-without knowing who the other is and that they’re actually just living together!.

Another major subplot is that the siblings also unknowingly love each other more than they are supposed to…and this will cause both their wishes for the world to come true to an extent with the Prince paying most of the cost…with his downfall!.

The Prince and the Princess are both unnervingly beautiful cunning, cautious, manipulative, and ruthless when it comes to pursuing their ends and both possesses a genius level intellect with which they are able to pull of bold and audacious, often double-faced tactics and maneuvers!. I label this story as fantasy despite it having virtually no magic in the main plot(it does have something similar to magic-but it’s hardly useful to most people and is mostly there just for eye candy and a way to keep my character’s young and beautiful) It’s also NOT set in a medieval world!.


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I reckon it sounds awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com

definitely there is always a way for that!. definitely, and the reason is that people like all kind of stories!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Um!.!.!.you might want to look up Mary Sue!.

Stunningly gorgeous AND royal AND geniuses AND permanently young is starting to sound a bit perfect to me!. Perfect characters are boring!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would love to read it when it is finished!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

no it's to serious!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good story, I like it very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes Www@QuestionHome@Com

yea i'd buy itWww@QuestionHome@Com

cathrl69!.

Don't worry they're FAR from perfect^^ hehe

I made sure they stood far away from the Mary Sue category!. They aren't good at everything and there's a good reason why they are good at the things they are!.They're weak at some subjects,and have a lot of character defects and flaws,the only thing I made sure they weren't was whiny and annoying and the universe doesn't bend so easily to their plans-and not everybody likes them!.

also the characters are deconstructions, combinations and twists of certain archetypes and royalty and nobility is a little something else in this world!.




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