Poem i wrote in 3rd grade?

Question: Poem i wrote in 3rd grade!?

how do you like it i wrote it in 3rd grade

Life by; Elijah Abeyta
Life is like a board game not knowing what will happen how long or short it will be how easy or hard life can possibly seem, life has winding and straight roads life may take you any where any where at all a big city a or small town even your own room life can be a roller coaster of disaster or a cup cake of delight life will take you any where you might delightWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Nice!. Some punctuation would make this poem better (I think)!. But overall pretty insightful for a 3rd grader!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its definatly a 3rd graders work, but its deep!. Take it and make it more "gown up"!. It has potential!. =]
Its one deep poem for a 3rd grader!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Any time you mention cup cake in writing its usually by an 8 year old!.!.!.actually younger like kindergarten lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty decent for a third-grader!. Thought-provoking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

eh it's ok!. deep for an eight yr oldWww@QuestionHome@Com