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Question: Teens: I need feedback on a YA story I'm writing!.!?
Okay, guys, my usual genre is adult romance, but the storyline I'm currently toying with just won't seem to go away!.

As a genre, I guess it falls into a few: a YA story involving darker romance, a little horror and some thriller/suspense!.

Like I said, this isn't my usual type of story, so I really need to know if I'm on the right track!. What I have complete is a rough version of the first chapter!.

I'd appreciate anyone who wants to read it and give me feeback--good or bad!. Is it boring!? Confusing!? Is the main character, Cora, interesting!? Do you want to read more!? Should there be more/less action!?

Tell me!

Here's the link:

http://shortstories!.student!.com/readstor!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
After the first sentence I was hooked! I love how you described everything so well!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Omg !
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