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Question: You are then you arent poem please read!!! please!!?
You are then you arent,

you hate me then you like me,

You do then you dont

make up youre mind before i make up mine

you hate her but you like her

you like her but you love her

you will but you wont

Make up youre mind before i make up mine

you lie then you cheat

But its okay because you are sorry!?

Make up youre mind before i make up mine

Do you care!? Do you want to!? Do you like me or do you hate me!?

Make up youre mind before i make up mine

but its all the same

You are then you arent

you hate me then you like me

you do then you dont

you will but you wont

you love her but then you hate her

you cheat then you lie

but it's all okay because you are sorry!?

But now i have made up my mind

And its too late

Because you arent sorry!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Bad Poem, Good Rock Song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Fix the grammatical errors, or put them in such a way that they help the poem!. The errors irked me too much to enjoy the poem!.

A bit redundant, so yes, it might make a good song with a bit of polishing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com