My friend has been writing this story for a while now, but shes stuck!. This is the part she's stuck on:
-Leo-
I’m a mess!.
I curl up on the sofa, as small as I can manage,
As if to disappear!.
Layla sits besides me, holding me and rocking my gently!.
“I love you” I mumble!.
She hushes me soothingly!.
“Sorry” I close my eyes, wishing myself far far away from this mess!.
“Why!?” Layla asks quietly!.
I sit up to face her, taking her hand and looking in her innocent loving eyes!.
“I couldn’t stand it!. Toby publicly humiliated me!. I had to get out!. Before I did something I’d regret” I slur!.
“Where did you go!?” she whispered in my ear!.
She needs a reaction to that question
Here's what I've come up with so far, just to build up to it a bit more:
MY IDEAS!
Tears sting my sore eyes, as I look up at Layla
I'm so lucky to have her here
But sometimes I cant help but wonder
If she'd be better off without me
I'm a mess!. I keep myself together in front of my sisters with a painted on smile and false happiness!.
When inside, all I feel is bitter melancholy!.
But then Layla comes along, and changes all that
All of a sudden, my sadness turns into smiles
All I have to do is look into her deep brown(!?) eyes and all my dread just fades away!.
But, just like a drug, after the high is a sudden plunge of depression and anger!.
Thats what happened yesterday!.
But!.!.!. even though I get given crap, day in, day out, I suppose theres always a few things to hold on to
Things to keep me hopeful
Layla is definatly one of them!.
And now I need her more than ever!.
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All we need is a short answer, but it needs to be meaningful, and please nothing like 'It doesn't matter, all that matters is that im here now'Www@QuestionHome@Com