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The mirror is broken JiJi is gone JiJi is mystery JiJi is devoured by demons JiJi JiJi The flower that blossomed has withered Still there is faint voice from the past of sweet JiJi that once she was Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Nice poem, well writtenWww@QuestionHome@Com |