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Question: Can you help me with my story!?
You see there are two sisters that were abandoned by their parents!. Well the mother was killed and the father was killed by the police!.
The older sister loved basketball and was unfortunately always in trouble!.This only happens when she feels angry because she just wanted to protect her sister!. You can say she is somewhat misunderstood!.
Her sister on the other hand, is the exact opposite!. She is always being bullied but she stays quite about it because she doesn't want her sister to know!. She is very friendly and she wants to speak her mind but she is very afraid!. She wants to make a difference!.

Well now you know the rough draft!. So can you help me think of
some problems, small problems that can help the big problem:
The sisters need to find their roles!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
hmm sounds interesting so far!.!.!.how about the younger sister is accused of cheating or something even though she didnt and her older sis has to like help her our b/c she wont say anything so that the person who accused her wont get in truble!?!?!.!.!.!.umm how about money probs!? or like a relative coming to stay whose controlling!?!? lol i have so many ideas!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think this is going to make for a very interesting story!. Now that I think about it, my sister and I are a lot like your characters!. Anyway, I think in your story the sister(s) should discover something about them self!. It could be like a personnel journey for them!. I don't know if you can work with that or something, but I hope it helps a little!. Good luck! Www@QuestionHome@Com

if your asking strangers online about writing your own book, maybe you shouldn't be writing!.


oh, and if you do take someones idea, you have to give that person credit!. so your not the writer, your the co-writer!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

This sounds like a great plot!. I recommend joining a writing community like http://www!.chapteread!.com to get some help on building story!. The people there are great and are very helpful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com