Do I have a pretty creative mind to come up with this story out of no where ?

Question: Do I have a pretty creative mind to come up with this story out of no where !?

This girl asked a question about an hour ago, and I had to make a story on based on the things she gave me!. So I just started typing away, and came up with the story as I went alone, took me about 15 minutes to finish!. I was in a hurry, so look over the grammar and punctiation!. heres the link:

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I thought it was very good!.
and only in fifteen minutes!? Well, I guess if it was for a girl!.!.!.!.!.
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Sorry, I was put off after the first few lines too!. You may well be a very creative and imaginative person, in which case good luck to you!.

Here's a heads-up in case you were truly unaware: your whole question smacks of an obnoxious boastfulness that is quite repulsive!. Perhaps people might be more willing to read and comment on your writing if you showed an appropriate degree of humility!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow i couldnt read it to the end either, is that really the best you could come up with!? basically you just tossed in the given things and as much randomness that you could get out of yourself into a pile!. im not going to sugarcoat this, it was really bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry, but it just doesn't do it for me!. Sounds like a pretty naive idea, and I didn't even read to the end because it was that corny!. Sorry, but I guess that's just me!. Don't really let it get you down!Www@QuestionHome@Com