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Question: What do you think of my short story!?
I just started writing earlier today and this is what happened!. I didn't really want their to be a before (as in something explaining all of this) because I hate it when stories do that!. This is just a short story!. I kind've wanted it to be like something Edgar Allen Poe would write!. How it just starts and then ends!.!.!. Let me know if you think there should be a "Before"!. The object of this was to get the reader to want more!.!.!.!.
CRITIQUE and possibly COMPLIMENTS!
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Wow that was really good!
A few typos here and there, but they can easily be solved!. I particulary liked the part where blaise moved the hair from one side to teh other then whispers in her ear!. That really got to me!.
I would have liked to know about how julia got to get into the forest, and how blaise got to be so evil, but seen as this piece is a short story, i wouldnt be expecting novel material!.
all in all, id give you a 4*Www@QuestionHome@Com
No, I don't think there needs to be a "before"!.
I think it's good!. But right now, with all the hype over Twilight, it's just white noise!. There are too many teen girls trying to write about vampires right now!. Even if your work is amazing, now isn't a good time to try this kind of thing!. Put this story on the back burner for a bit, wait for the hype to die down, and try releasing it in a couple years!. Try writing other things in the meantime!.
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Its, cool but what kind of a monster would he be for him to snap her neck!?
Free, free as a bird, caught in the gates of hell!.!.!.
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