Need help with my vampire love story?

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Question:

so far i have a lot here are my characters

Name: Evangeline
Age: 14
Species: Vampire
Gender: Female (shocker)

Name: Erin
Age: 15
Species: Human
Gender: Male

Name: Raphael
Age: 15
Species: Vampire
Gender: Male (Duh)

Name: Angelique
Age:18
Species: Vampire
Gender: Female

Name: Guinevere
Age: (I don't know yet)
Species: Vampire
Gender: Female

Name: Solomon
Age: (idk yet)
Species: Vampire
Gender: Male

Name: Lucy
Age: 14
Species: Human
Gender: Female (how did you guess)

This isn't like Meyer's saga because they are all biological family except for the humans and the sun actually does hurt them and they do somewhat sleep in coffin and they do turn into bats and have fangs and can fly!. so i have it pretty good till the fifth chapter when Evangeline and Erin go to the dance together i haven't really thought much past that except for an evil vampire might come to the dance and take the Vampire girl (Evangeline) so i need a name age gender for that one and more ideas please!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You got one thing wrong in this sentence (I put it in brackets lol): "Every 375 (years) a solar eclipse breaches our earth causing everything to go dark to human eyes all people can see is a red thin line in the shape of a circle while we feed, we are vampires but we are stuck in our forms!."

other than this it is excellent!

I know you asked for a name for the kidnapper but if you have a main villein you could have a normal vampire (no name but maybe a description) kidnap her and take her to your main villein!.

Info for kidnapper/evil villein:

Name: Saveneir
Age: 21
Species: vampire
Gender: Male

p!.s This sounds like a really good series so keep writing :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Be careful with these ages!.!.!. A vampire who's eternally under the age of concent can be a tricky selling point!.!.!. (16 is considered acceptable, but 14 is pushing it)

For an "Evil Vampire" name!.!.!. Well, it depends!.!.!. on the origins of that vampire!.!.!. on the "real age" of that vampire!.!.!. and on WHY the evil vampire wants to take Evangeline (Love that name, btw) !.!.!. I have 7 books I'm working on currently and 4 of them involve vampires, lol!.!.

Anywho, here are a couple of ideas:

Original name unknown, goes by "Jack"
eternally 16, technically 238
vampire
male
motives: lust, entertainment, etc

OR

Original name unknown, goes by "Victoria"
eternally 16, techniclly 614
vampire
female
motives: jealousy, lust, entertainment, etc!.

EDIT:

BTW, "Erin" is the girl spelling of "Aaron"Www@QuestionHome@Com

evil vampire, diurmud, could be vampire who wants to get with Evangeline even though he's technically her real great great great grandfather from an ancient gypsy/ druidian blood line!. He is envious of her and tries to lock her in a cage for himselfWww@QuestionHome@Com

vampire are not emos all those names are emosWww@QuestionHome@Com

What was the question again!?

How about they all have one big orgyWww@QuestionHome@Com