Please Help :-( No one has so Far and i need 15 Review's by tomorrow at 8AM?

Question: Please Help :-( No one has so Far and i need 15 Review's by tomorrow at 8AM!?

i need some people to review this story that i had to write for creative writing class http://www!.fanfiction!.net/secure/live_pr!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

There are a few grammatical things that trip me up while reading, like "It was a tragic day for him and I the day that mother died!.!.!." I would have expected "for him and me!.!.!."

To be honest, this story didn't really grab me - I found my attention wandering!. But maybe it's just not my genre!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

As requested I have reviewed your piece!.
My name starts with a Voo!.!.
Anyway here are some techniques I use to encourage people to review my fanfictions:
I read and review every possible story that I can bring myself to read!.
This increases my own name recognition, and improves me as a writer!.
It also encourages the authors of those stories to review my story to reciprocate the favour (hint, hint, nudge)
So between now and tomorrow try and review every Twilight fanfiction you can possibly force yourself to read!.
Obviously I am not (like most of the people yahoo answers for that matter) into twilight at all so the Story wasn't my thing, perhaps go onto a twilight forum and ask people to read and review there!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would but sorry it won't let me see it because it says that I have not logged in to whatever site that was!. Sorry!.!.!. Maybe try copying and pasting to a question!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

your link requires a login!. That's going to discourage people like me from looking at your story!.Www@QuestionHome@Com