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Position:Home>Books & Authors> Can I get some help pleez?Question: Can I get some help pleez!? OKay so I want to write a first kiss scene in my novel!.
So let me give you some backround info, Gregory (the protagonist) just saved Millie, and they both secretly liked eachother since they were younger!. Can you give me some examples too!. I want to write a kissing scene, but I cant figure out how to write it!.!.!. :o can you help me!? :)Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Don't worry about the details of how it looked more like how it feels focus on that!. The only thing you need to visualize for the reader is the leaning in and what the characters thought before it!. As its going on use amazing metaphors and similes and sparkling words!. try not to describe it like other book describe it don't use the one word people always use fireworks don't use that describe it like your describing it to a person who was born as a fully developed adult and has never experienced anything in their life before (i know its weird) but it helps Hope i helped!!Www@QuestionHome@Com there is a really good one in inkheart, in the hard cover version it is page 282 as for the scenery the best is in the rain usually makes it seem more passionate, also make sure he moves in first and that it seems as if the world could end and they wouldn't notice and also as soon as their done they should stare into each others eyes for a moment that seems to take forever!. Hope that helps : )Www@QuestionHome@Com Well, these are two of my first kiss scenes from two of my novels!. Look at them (don't copy!) and try to get something from that!. Hope it helps!! More High School: He gazed into her eyes!. Their electrical aura pulled Rachel closer to him and in no time they were only inches apart!. More than anything, Rachel wanted him to kiss her!. They didn’t speak, but strangely enough, it didn’t feel quiet!. John pushed back Rachel’s hair and wrapped a loose strand around her ear!. He was too good at this!. Rachel felt hazy, like nothing was real!. Her crush leaned in and placed his lips on hers!. He pulled away and they looked at each other for a moment before going in for another kiss!. The first led into another and then another after that!. That's one!.!.!.then here's the second one (More Romantic): I look up at him and at this point in time, it feels like we're the only two people on the earth!. He gazes into my eyes and the blackness of them swallows me up!. I am lost in him and he is lost in me!. We are floating, like in a dream, and nothing seems real!. Anything is possible!. I can soar, I can breath fire, I can be who I want to be, and at the very least, I can be kissed!. At this moment in time, Ryan Harland is my guy!. And at this moment in time he kisses me!. I like the second one a lot better!.!.!.Honestly, it's like a fantasy of mine!. Ha ha!. Www@QuestionHome@Com If you could have the perfect first kiss with a guy, how would it go!? Seriously, just write it the way you would want it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |