Now bare in mind I am new to this sort of writing
I NEED FEEDBACK in order to persue this further!
I think this May turn out to be a thriller!
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It was cold and windy and just like any other day on Fairview Banks another routine afternoon
But on this particular day something was all about to change !.!.
"Morning Arnold!" "oh hey Jenny" Arnold and jenny went way back
they were friends since birth, for you see their mothers were blood sisters after a ritual event went wrong, which took place at their sorority!.!.
They have been best friends ever since
"Hey you know that new neighbour!? Mrs Benson i think her name is"
"what new neighbour!?" asked arnold looking a bit perplexed
"Um the lady up on Meinstreet!" exclaimed jenny, But arnold just stared at her in bewilderment
then a thought crossed Arnold's mind and he gave a shudder for he had seen no one up there ever since that fateful and tragic night!.!.
But He chose to put it out of his mind "um no I haven't yet"
"what's wrong Arnold!? You look like you have seen a Ghost!
"nah it's Nothing Jen just getting a bit chilly is all come on then lets go inside! Arnold said with a pale expression on his face
Jenny had only just Recently returned to Fairview ,after moving away at 9 to Arandale county
because her parents split up ,She then completed her 3 year course in Advertising and Business management!.
And decided it was time to come home!
So she had no idea of whom had been where or done what for that matter !.!.
"Okay I think maybe you need to sit down Jen!" now inside a fire lit and Hot chocolate
served, they sat in a cosy loveseat reminising about their childhood
and the silly games they used to play on onenother
"ooh hehe Remember when I went over to cindy's house to Play teatime and then you !.!."And then I snuck around the side and peeked in through
the window" Arnold interrupted! "yeah and then we caught sight of you and you High-tailed
it outta there as fats as you could " chuckled jenny
"heh Yup i was one hella kid back then huh!?" "you sure were" said jenny all the while gazing lovingly into his sparkly blue eyes
But of course Arnold was too busy sipping his warm beverage to Have noticed a thing! " Typical MEN!" she thought to herself
" Ooh look at the time I gotta run sorry Arn" said jenny who rushed off down the passage grabbing her coat off the hook
and shoving her cell into her pocket like a pro! "see ya I'll ring later"
" ooh okay bye then" "Oh wait Jen you forgot oh nevermind" Said Arnold Because in a flash she was already out the door and half way driven out the driveway to have heard a thing
She forgot her purse! and arnold being the inquistive man that he was was nearly tempted to look inside but thought it best not to since it was already hard to understand woman at this point to even consider daring to break the myth of the "handbag"
Arnold said in a mock tone voice "hmm that girl is always on the move she really needs to slow down a bit before she has a stoke!"
Arriving home she opened her door moved towards the stairs , unbuttoning her top
as she reached each step
Threw her clothes into a hamper by the bedside and jumped into a hot shower
Now refreshed and energised she picked up the phone and called an old friend
" Hi Cinds what's Up!? been awhile Hasn't it! listen Can i come over!?"
"sure you can! just be sure to bring the Tequila!" the woman on the other end said
It was a ritual with these two women that each time they visited eachother they brought a bottle of
spirits!.
Jenny calm now tossed a few outfits on the bed not making her mind up which suited her best
"oh let me just go with the black top and jeans hmm what do you think bella!?" she asked her labrador pup who before been rudely awoken by the sound of her voice was sleeping sounly curled up in her bed!.
"of course you do don't you yes you're my little angel aren't You yes you are" she walked over picked her up giving
her ball of fluff as she called her a kiss and played with her ears "yap yap" cried an excited Bella!
Okay hunny bunny i gotta be going now mommy will be back real soon I promise
then we can go for a midnight stroll across the park hows that sound hmm!?"
she really loved her dog as bella was the only family she had left
"bye my angel" she bellowed as she walked out the door
At Cindy's house she felt secure knowing her friend will Comfort her
Wow you look fantastic Cinds!" " Huh!? oh yeah i just lost a few pounds is all"
"A Few! looks more than just a few Cindy!" Jenny Said excitedly
" kay Your'e right! I do look Fabulous don't I!?" said cindy striking a pose "My hubby seems to think so too"
she winked "please sit down" she said hinting to the sofa " ooh you naughty girl you I bet he does!"
"well come on then you've barely been back a week Now spill!" cindy always knew just what to say to get Jenny to open up"
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