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The story is about people that hate life, and then small, tragic, events start to happen, and they finally open there eyes and are happy!.!.!. Or something like that!.!.!.!. Anyway here it is :

School!. The best part of the day, hours while I’m away from home, and free to be myself!. Time that I can spend with people that are like me, people that understand me!. Like Conner!.

What a graceful name for such a stuck-up person, “puppy lover” (a!.k!.a!. Conner, seriously that’s what his name means in some language that I don’t know!.) was nothing like what you’d picture him, in your head!.

He was black from head to toe, oh, and don’t forget the chains, and random body piercing here and there!. He used to have blond hair, but he died it black because it’s his new favorite color!.!. He used to be a normal person, until he started hanging out with me and my gang–I mean group!.

He was sort of shy the year before he joined the group, but now he doesn’t give a f—my bad again—crap about what he says, or does, or wears, or what others think of him!.

He has the perfect life, I life I have longed strived for!. Mine wasn’t bad, it’s just I don’t like it!. Many people would be grateful for it, but me, no!. I’d much rather live in a one story house with two bedrooms and a bathroom/kitchen then a three story house with way to much room!.My house would be cluttered with everything, if I had one!. It’d look like I want it to look like, it’d match who I really am!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.




That's where I stopped writing!. Anyway tell me what you think, I'm open to anything you have to say!.!.!.!. but, yeah, thanks!

NicoleWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Awesome start!. I really like the plot!. I would like to see where you take the story!. You should post this on http://www!.chapteread!.com It's this cool writing site I've been on lately!. The people there are really great about giving feedback and advice!. I'll be looking out for you postings on chapteread I'd love to read more of your work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG Excelent I love it!!
Keep writing more I'd love to read it when it's done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.!.That is REALLY good!.!.!.i love it!.!.!.you are a fantastic author!.!.!.i myself love to write!.!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com