Can you tell me if this sounds like a good story plot?

Question: Can you tell me if this sounds like a good story plot!?

Two teenagers in their junior year meet at a pizza bar!. But the girl is a geek, and the guy is a jock!. But for some reason, they both are pulled to each other!. The guy's friends don't like the idea of him dating a geek, but he doesn't care what they think!. After a while, they really are serious about dating each other!. (not like that) Anywho, he tries changing her appearance, changing what she does and basically tries to make her one of him!. Then he realizes that he shouldn't do that!. The End!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Conflict, add some twists, make it your own and you can write a story about anything and make it a page turner!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes its a good story plot, interseting but just like any other story!.!.!.
why dont you mix it up a little bit then make the girl popular and the boy a geek she tries to change him then realizes its wrong takes him to a reporter and makes "geek" officially "in"Www@QuestionHome@Com

i don't like the ending!.!.!.!. its too "rushy" your ending does not have a steady pace!. i highly suggest putting what he did to change her appearance!. !. for example, you could put going to the mall and get a make over, buying new clothes, and etc!.!.!.

you should be fine after that!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!. You just described like every teen story in the world!. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. Too Vague!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

At first take, it sounds like wish fulfillment to me, and it seems VERY similar to Stargirl!. But if you can write it in a new, realistic way, it could be great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Truthfully, this plot has been used countless of times in the past!. Although, if you add some of your own original twists to the plot, that can help make it stand out better than all the rest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds like the next disney FREE movie!. it's ok but i wouldn't read it!. you need more twists and turns and things to make it special!. it is Way TO BASIC!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not very good!. Very sterotypical!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's not a very original idea, in my opinion, and it isn't something that I could imagine being interesting =/Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's Okay but it kinda sounds like " She's All That"Www@QuestionHome@Com

a little cliche but hey, it sounds like it'd be fun to write!.

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Hmmmm, REALLY GOOD! ^!.^Www@QuestionHome@Com

ya but in ur story add details but as a basic plot this is goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

yeah I think it does :]Www@QuestionHome@Com