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Hallie's Story
by Greta


Hallie steadily opened her heavy eyes into the blue morning twilight that
shone through her window!. She felt something heavy wrapped around
the small of her back!. Whose arms was she in this time!? She turned
over to caress the smooth and muscular figure, and as the tingling
sensation spread throughout her body didn’t have to look at his face to
know it wasn’t her fiancé that lay next to her!. Last night began coming
back to her, the dancing, the passion, the feelings …and the hiding!.

Hallie looked upon Christians sleeping face!. She clasped his hand to
her heart!. She couldn’t believe she had known him almost 20 years now,
her childhood sweetheart!. They had been through so much, especially
the past few months!. He had been in her life ever since she could
remember!. And also out of it!. He was always the one she ran back to,
but he had commitment issues so it was a constant on and off ordeal!. It
was the story of her life, their lives!.

He looked so innocent when he slept, which was ironic knowing the
things she did with him last night!. She started to reminisce about the
pounding of the music!. The pounding of their bodies against one
another in the dark shadows of the nightclub… the sly smirk that had
formed on her face quickly disappeared when she realized she had
better check to see if she had any missed calls!.

She raced to pull the cell phone off the charger: Three missed calls, all
from David!. She clutched the cell to her ear and raced into the bathroom
to listen to her voicemail!. Her fiancés steady yet suspecting voice
immediately entered her ear: “Hey babe, just seein’ what you’re up to,
you said you’d call last night…you must have been having fun!.…Anyway
call me before you start your drive back up here!. I hope you and your
sister had a good time, I’m dyin’ to see ya!. Love you Hal!.”

It wasn’t that she was a heartless *****, she felt guilty knowing damn
well it was wrong that she completely lied to him!. She felt guilty not only
for cheating on David, but for sleeping with the man who was also his
greatest rival!. Christian and David went back since high school!. Always
competing against each other whether it was sports, career, women!.!.!. it
was a game among them!. The two were such polar opposites she
couldn’t believe she was in love with both of them!.

David came from a wealthy family!. He was successful, stable,
handsome, and would make the perfect husband to any girl!. But he had
chosen her because they were exactly the same!. The same meaning
they both came from wealthy families that could only associate with other
wealthy families!. Hallie’s daddy wouldn’t dream of letting her marry
Christian!.

Christian had been an orphan since he was seven years old!. He grew
up moving from place to place, a real troubled kid!. Because of this
Christian had problems trusting people, even her!. They could never
make a relationship work!. It didn’t help that Hallie’s parents constantly
frowned upon him any chance they got!. They even went so far as to
nickname him “street rat” and had been proudly calling him that to his
face since he was a child!.

But despite his turbulent life Christian had blossomed into something
beautiful!. He was a gifted and successful artist and was the fantasy of
any girl he saw!. While he didn’t make enough money to impress Hallie’s
stuck up family, he had always been enough to impress her!. Whenever
she was with him it was always exciting, a relief from her stifled life of
yachting and taunting the poor!.

Suddenly Hallie heard the springs in Christians cheap bed squeaking
as he stirred in his sleep!. She wondered if he was having another
nightmare!. She crept into his room softly, his back was to her!. He
harshly turned over and then again, shakily mumbling incomprehensible
words!. Yes definitely a nightmare!.

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He came out of nowhere and blazed a trail of bloodshed and terror throughout the West but in the end the law caught up with him and just as he dispatched his victims to a traumatic death he himself was released to hells half acre by the sound of the end of the rope snapping his neck on the gallows of the old west!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i ws sitting in the rain, waiting for someone to call me in!. but clearly, no one called me!. and so, i ended up getting a fever the next day!. i walked around town, looking very much sick, but no one came to help!. and so i ended being very, very sick!. the next day, i went to hospital to get treatment, and i became healthy back!. and that is the story of a girl who wants attention!.!.!.!.

is that good for you!?

please, ten points!? *puppy dog eyes*Www@QuestionHome@Com

They were barely visible in the dark!. She was wearing a black pointy hat and a long black cloak!. A black cat trailed behind her!. Its bright eyes lay fixed on me!. I couldn’t look away!. All of a sudden there was a flash of light, and they were gone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followedWww@QuestionHome@Com

Once upon a time there was a magical place where it never rained!.!.!. the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com