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Question: What do u think of this idea for my story!?
a boy name Jacob had autism, and lives in a small apartment with his mother, who is called louise!. Louise's distant relatives offer her a job in a dockyard in australia, and louise decides to move there!. in australia jacob falls in love with a girl called Cassie!. and louise's also finds love!.!.!. what do u think!? what could i do 2 improve!? (the twist is that jacob gets cassie pregnant)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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I like the general concept, but make sure you have really done your research in terms of people with autism!. I have two people in my family with autism and building and maintaining relationships can be very difficult depending on their level of functionality!.

When portraying a mental or physical impairment, research is critical!. I would recommend doing conventional research but also try to communicate with some people with autism and those who have family members with autism!.

This will bring a true connection to your piece!.

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Louise now could kick Jacob out the house, and he has to live with Cassie, even though Cassie's family doesn't approve of him, and don't want her to have a baby so young, but they have no money for an abortion!. Plus Cassie's family could be highly religious or something!. Hope this helped a little more lol Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah - I think you could have something!. But I think the coolest thing is to maybe focus on the Autism!. A lot of people don't really get it, so maybe you are someone who does!.

Just start writing and then take it to people you trust to give you an honest opinion (friends usually won't - they will just tell you it's great)!. Just write and see where it goes!.

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It lacks a certain insistence upon itself!.
What if!?!.!.!.!.!.Cassie cheats on Jacob with a guy, Tony!. Tony has found a cure for autism!. Jacob is cured but there are side effects, namely, he becomes a werewolf!.
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How about if Jacob's autism is contageous and the only way to stop it from spreading is to quarantine all of Australia!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!! that's really good! I would enjoy reading this, thanks for the comment on my story! I could never come up with something this good though!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'll watch anything about autism or Australia, mate!. Www@QuestionHome@Com