My story plot? what do u think?

Question: My story plot!? what do u think!?

a boy name Jacob had autism, and lives in a small apartment with his mother, who is called louise!. Louise's distant relatives offer her a job in a dockyard in australia, and louise decides to move there!. in australia jacob falls in love with a girl called Cassie!. and louise's also finds love!.!.!. what do u think!? what could i do 2 improve!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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The idea sounds like a good start, to me!. Next, though, you have to develop the characters!. What do they look like!? What are their favorite foods, hobbies, etc!?

Next, do a scene-by-scene plan/outline and put the plot together!. There's lots o'planning before any prose is put to paper!. F!. Scott Fitzgerald used to wallpaper his rooms with outines for novels!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well it sounds like too much of happy ending all around, you need some suspension and a little more of drama!. Such as maybe only Louise falls in love, and Jacob can't adjust to the new town he's moved too!. Or Jacob falls in love with Cassie and gets her pregnant and is stuck in a dilemma!. But I think that you should make one of them feel miserable, people sell on misery a little bit, but in the end if they both fall in love Louise and Jacob!. Well then thats the ending, but add some insanity in the mix, hope this helped!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Could work, but make sure you're not just using autism as a way of making your story different!. You have to actually be interested in it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have no plot!. What is the major conflict!?

And if you are writing about someone with autism, make sure you research it thoroughly or it will sound very fake!.

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