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Question: Here are the synopsis of my new fantasy series(plz don't steal),do u like it!?
a 14 yrs old math genius named victor greene,after the sudden death of his father and victor's breaking up with chelsea!.!.!.!.victor finds about a new magical power that allows him to do magic through math equations,but at his fathers funeral victor is beckoned by crimson hooded man named Argos!.!.!.!.he tells victor about a secret order named the mathmage that his father was a member in!.,and now he's offering him to join them,but as victor joins the mathmage he befriends doladi victor's new love interest!.!.!.also the dark secrets that the magical equations holds!.!.horrible secrets will uncover when scorpios the former leader of the mathmage looses his soul equation on the hands of argos and now scorpios has to find his soul equation to regain his ability to apply magical equations!.!.!.!.but argos,and the mathmage shall face him with all possible means!.!.!.and try to keep victor away because victor's equation is the same as scorpios's equation and here we know that scorpios is his true biological father!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.will victor be able to love doladi with complete devotion!?will he give up his soul equation when he knows that scorpios is his father!?!?!?


do u like it !?!?!?/is it original and interesting!?
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Would be better portrayed being a film rather than a book because it seems complicated here but yes it is very interesting and sounds exciting!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, math!.

Um!.!.!. the whole math in a fantasy story thing is original!.

But I don't know if it would interest me!. Especially (no offense) if your writing skills match the grammar of this summary!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a bit far-fetched, but i love it! It's totally original and I'd definitely read it is I saw it in barnes and noble or something!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's is kinda original but , for a start
-I think the name mathmage is not a good choice ,
-I didn't understand how normal people has more earthly names ( victor , chelsea) and mathmage guys have names like argos , scorpio !. you can add a ceremony where they give nicknames!.
-Well equatations are things like 13+3=16 ( as far as I remember I'm not english :P ) , finding an equatation for soul is , I don't know maybe a good idea cause most of the people won't think about it while reading it!. I think it would be better to find a better reason or something but it's just to make it better , it's fine this way too !.

and I think you should add more details about the story , but I think you can also write a good story and overall ( in my opinion ofcourse) it's over average , pretty good :P

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If you intend to use math as the method for your magic, then I hope you're skilled in two very important areas: math, and making math interesting!.

When I say "making math interesting", by the way, I'm not talking about using it to do magic!. I'm talking about making math itself interesting!. The only way to blend math and magic together and make it look authentic is to place the emphasis on the math part!. When it comes to fantasy readers, no one cares about how magic works until someone tries to explain it!. So if you intend to explain it with math, then you'd better make it look genuine to anyone who's already into math!.

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