1) I am not a murderer!.
2) We are a proud people!.
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Position:Home>Books & Authors> What do you think of these opening lines?Question: What do you think of these opening lines!? 1) I am not a murderer!.
2) We are a proud people!. Which one is better!? And what are your suggestions!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You know what would hook a reader even better!? Am I a murderer!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Neither!. They are both cliche!. If you changed it to something like, "Most people would think I'm a murderer!.", it would be more attention grabbing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com One!. It shows a mysterious edge to the story instead of stating an obvious fact!. Lines like that draw people into stories!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Number 1!. It makes the story seem more intriguing to the reader!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Definitely 1 Www@QuestionHome@Com number 1 because it makes u interested i dont have any suggestions sorry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Number one because it cause a kind of interested doubtWww@QuestionHome@Com 1!.Www@QuestionHome@Com For some reason i like the second one but i guess that's just me!. i think the first one may be a bit cliche!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |