I really like Tamora Pierce, and i wann be published?

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i really like all her books and someday i would like to be at her feet i am writing a book but it has really bad punctuiation and speeling please forgive!. please tell me if my book passage is good, i know it will never amount to tamoras

5!.)”you told me someday and someday is soon!. I don’t want this when life is trivial!.” her voice warbled!. She had a firey rage in her eyes!. He turned around, he took his hand and placed it on her chin!. “ I told you ,long ago I would marry you!. I intend to keep my promise” he walked away!. They traveled some ways and Donin set up camp!. She looked around and walked to the stream!. Her bedroll began to unfold!. She screamed out “I wont talk to you, at least for the rest of the night!.” he nodded!. He knew all to well how she could be!. The stars sparkeld but were not as beautiful as her eyes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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To be honest, I didn't understand it!. Perhaps this is because it was out of context!. I'm sure you can improve the grammar just by re-reading it!.

Tamora Pierce is a great author!. I really enjoyed all her books, especially the Immortals and the Trickster serieses!. The thing is, the world already has quite a few Tamora Pierce books to choose from, so there isn't really a market for a Tamora Pierce copy (at least from a publisher's point of view)!. There is a thriving fan community that writes fanfiction using Tamora Pierce characters/ styles!. go to www!.fanfiction!.net to have a look!.

If you are serious about being published, you will need to develop your own storyline and writing style!. You won't get very far if you copy someone elses!. You'll need an exciting plot and characters that no-one has met before!.

Remember that the more you write, the better you will get at it!
Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I can't think of anything constructive to write, so I'll just suggest you keep working at your craft!.Www@QuestionHome@Com