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Question: Will you read this thing that I wrote!?
I never knew I could get this far, on foot no less!. The cloudless night sky, quiet and desolate, made my thoughts clearer; as if the heavens reflected my thoughts!.

It was raining earlier when I was crying!. Harder, when I began this escape from the unknown!. I still don't understand what happened exactly, and my mind kept on moving away from the act of doing so!.

All I know is that they were murdered!.

I heard my parents cry out in the night!. My mom pleading, as if the killer would have any remorse and discontinue what he had planned to do!.

Why!? I don't know!.
By who!? Don't know either!.
At least I'm safe, I assured myself!. But for how long!?

I clutched my bag tighter to me and thought how foolish I was to bring this weight along!. It was my school bag and it's just full of school stuff!.

I emptied it along the way, scattering the contents in intervals, out to random places, Hoping to fool the pursuer!. But I know he's not a fool, he managed to kill my dad!. And my dad is certainly nowhere near anything foolish!.

I felt as if the moon is getting brighter, or maybe the sky clearer!. I got up and noticed none of my shoes have shoelaces!. I smiled at the thought that maybe little Christie got them again and used it to tie her hair into those curly, blond pigtails!.

Is she dead too!? I inhaled deeply and sighed!. No more tears, I said to myself!. I must continue on!.

But the town is still miles away, I'd probably get there by noon at this pace!. That is, if I'm not already lost!.

I looked around me and saw the hunched darkness of the mountains at the distance, blinked the moisture in my eyes away, and gripped my bag tighter!.

It was then I realized that I was really lost, entirely swallowed by the forest!. I guess the killer will succeed with whatever it is that he had planned soon!.

If a boy cried in a forest, and nobody is there to hear him, will he make a sound!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow!.

I'm having mixed emotions now, thanks for making such an awesome read!.

You know, while I was reading it, I felt the scenes just like how they'd be in the movies!. Haha, I imagined the boy wearing a baseball cap, with a red backpack, and his laceless-shoes!.

Very vivid and alive!.!.!. or dead!. Just joking!. I loved it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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