Question: Writers could you help me!?
I made a story about 4 fairies who are ordered to protect the prince who's somewhere in America but the problem is those fairies don't know who is the prince or what does he look like!. The time goes longer the protagonist falls for a human but the rule in their kingdom is to not fall in love with a human!. The bad guys are becoming stronger each day!. Do you know any place in America that has a great natural resources!? Could you guys help me spice up the story!? Because my classmates love the plot & the characters but I don't know how to make it more interesting (the characters are only in middle school), I read my script and its boring, could you help me!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Why not Niagra Falls or Yosemite or maybe the Grand Canyon!. Have your prince do something the fairies recognize as princely or as his personal habit!. Scratch his ear when he says I don't know or hum to himself when he eats an apple!.!.!.something the fairies have to use as a test on those they think might be the prince!.!.!.whatever the gimmick is it could be very funny!. If your fairies talk amongst themselves ,one of them might say things backwards or switched about like I'm toe sired for I'm so tired or I'm pickled tink for tickled pink!.!.!.that sort of thing!.
I hope these suggestions get you thinking!.!.!.good luck! Www@QuestionHome@Com
Write the setting based on where you live!. You'll be able to describe it better than any other geography!.
Read some fantasy books (wheel of time series, sword of truth novels, songs of fire and ice, lord of the rings, ect) and you'll get a feel for the genre and know what works for you as the audience and what doesnt so you can apply that in your own writing!.
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wow that sounds like an AWESOME story!!!!!= )
ummmm!.!.!.maybe you can put in more action and maybe while the fairies are looking for the prince the run into tons of trouble!.!.!.!.
and you can alternate between POV!.!.!.
as for the america thing!.!.!.when you say natural resources what do you mean!?!?!?!?like a place with all 4 elements!?!?!?!?if so maybe they can live in a forest with a huge river near by!.
idk where that would be!.sryWww@QuestionHome@Com
Colorado has a lot of natural resources (water, minerals, oil, etc)Www@QuestionHome@Com