What do you think of this for a book?

Question: What do you think of this for a book!?

the maids son is in love with a very respectable lords wife (the lord dies) but the wife is really mean ans treats her talented sister like dirt the son eventully relises she is a cow and realises all this time he has been in love with her sister, his friend!. she has always felt the same but when she realises he liked her sister she runs away and then he goes and finds her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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mmmm it sounds good u almost have me wanting to buy it but it needs something how does this sound

the maids son is in love with a very respectable lords wife (the lord dies) but what the son doesnt know is that the lord is in actual fact his father!. Lord whoevers(give him a name) wife is a very attractive lady who in fact the maids son(name) falls in love with but as the book unravels we see a secrety side to this distured love triangle that it is in actual fact Lady(name)s sister is the person talking for my lady so it is her the maids son is in love with!. she is a very talented beautiful human being who is undertreated by her evil sister the lady of wherever to live when all is released of no more secrets alie in this household and people begin to dissappe4arWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds ok, not enough detail to judge thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com