Can anybody make this sentence better?

Question: Can anybody make this sentence better!?

they were thrust down into the bottemles abyys but clinging to a lege they survived!. large rock fell wich thrust heat up at extreme speedsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Okay, so here's what I think:

*Spelling:

Bottemles - Bottomless
Lege - Ledge
Wich - Which
Speeds - Speed

*Punctuation Marks:

To a ledge, they survived!.
Large rock fell, which

Grammar:

Bottomless Abyss (Redundant), take out Bottomless, because an Abyss is already a bottomless pit!.

Added:

Then, a

**So!.!. Here it is!.

They were thrust down into the Abyss but clinging to a ledge, they survived!.!. Then, a large rock fell which thrusts up heat at extreme speed!.

What do you think!?

Good Luck!

-E!.R!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I didn't quite understand the second part, so I did the best I could with it! :)

They were thrust into the bottomless abyss, and only survived by clinging to a craggy ledge that thankfully broke their fall!. As they struggled, they kicked loose a large piece of the rockface!. It fell away, causing a wave of heat to rise that almost cooked them where they hung!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the part about clinging to a ledge just reword that a little like "but almost didn't survive, just catching a ledge and clinging to it for dear life!." or something!. also i'd change the second "thrust" to something else because you used thrust in the last sentence and it sounds weird!.
other than those, its great!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

They were falling down in to the Bottomless abyss , but somehow , they succeed to survive , by clinging to a pressing ledge!.
A large rock was thrusting down with an extreme speed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

They were thrust down into the bottemless abyss,but clinging to a ledge they survived!. A large rock which heated up at extreme speeds fell!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the first looks good but the second is off i dont fully understand the meaning to fix itWww@QuestionHome@Com