What do you think of my Twilight fan fiction?

Question: What do you think of my Twilight fan fiction!?

I have a fan fiction called "Fixing Dusk!." I'm trying to get it to reach more people, because, well, I kind of like the way it's shaping up!. I would love to hear what other people think about it and if they have any ideas to make it better!. So how could this be improved!?
http://www!.fanfiction!.net/s/4464489/1/Fi!.!.!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Oh wow!.
Now if that was the real ending, I might have liked the books!.

Hurry up and write more! xD
Chapter 25 ends so!.!.!.!.!.cliffhangery!. e!.eWww@QuestionHome@Com