This is the beginning of a story that I'm writing, comments would be nice!.
I woke up suddenly and looked over at the alarm clock on my nightstand!. It was 2:34 am!. Why did I have to be such a light sleeper!? I tried to go back to sleep, but I wasn’t feeling tired at all and I thought I would just go downstairs and watch some TV!. I stood up and crept silently across the old hard-wood floor to the other side of my room and stopped by the window to look outside into the dark night!. From here, you could see the full moon shining down on the forest and casting shadows and silhouettes onto the grass just outside my window!. Nighttime was so beautiful to me, but I still tried not to look out there for too long because my imagination can get a little crazy and I usually end up scaring myself!.
I kept looking anyways though and I really did see something creeping across the yard!. There was the shadow of a small person gliding towards the woods!. Startled, I kind of jumped awkwardly, blinked, and while wondering who could be outside in the middle of nowhere at 2:30 in the morning, I moved a little closer to the window!. I found out that I was watching my 6-year-old sister slowly advance towards the woods!. So much for watching TV!.
Quickly and quietly, I put a sweatshirt on (because it was chilly for a May night in Virginia,) and rushed downstairs to go find my crazy little sister!. I grabbed the flashlight off of the kitchen table before I stepped out the side door and closed it behind me!. It slammed and I realized that the door was what probably woke me up!. I stopped to let my eyes adjust a little before I turned on the flashlight and started towards the woods!.Www@QuestionHome@Com