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I was a picture perfect image of my mother!. I had her curly, red hair that hung past my shoulders!. I had her high, perfect cheekbones and her deep, sea blue eyes!. The kind of blue that the ocean would look like after a big storm!. I had more freckles than her, but hardly anyone besides Aaron noticed!. I had her slim body, hers was a little more hourglass shaped than mine, but it was almost the same!. I sang well, like she did, and I played sports!. Softball was my favorite, she didn‘t really like the idea of me scraping up my “perfect knees” as she would say!. I was a horrible cook, as was she!. It came in handy that my father was a chef at the most exquisite restaurant in town!. “Ugh! This is horrible! I can’t go downstairs looking like this!” I groaned!. My hair was all tangled!. It had fallen out of the low and loose side ponytail that left my red curls cascading around my face!. My black dress was a little wrinkled, but my makeup was horrible!. Ugh!. I did look like a raccoon!. “Aaron!? Hello!? This is the part where you tell me that I always look gorgeous,” I whined!. Through the mirror I could see he was staring at me!.


well that is how i describe the girl in my story!.


EDIT: i didn't say she had big eyes did i!? no maybe answer the question instead of criticize mine!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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If you're trying to describe a girl's beauty you shouldn't just describe her big eyes and high cheekbones and perfect teeth!. If you're trying to describe her beauty you should focus on the way she carries herself, write about the special, inexplicable something she has that sets her apart from the crowd!. More than often it isn't a perfect physique, but the twinkle in her eye and the way she exudes a mystery no one can quite figure out!.

I would've written you a paragraph if I could be sure you were looking for an example, and not an easy way out!.

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