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Question: I wrote this a little while back and i was wondering if anyone thinks its any good!?
a thought on living!.

having nothing is the key!.
if you consider nothing to be yours than you can never be unhappy!.
the problem is in todays society we are forced to make things ours, homes, food, everything we need to survive is just given to us

for a price!.

greed has become the downfall and in our world greed is a necessity to be happy!.

its not our faults!. and i not saying everyones evil and wrong!. but if we really look at things for what they are we can change the future!.

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Interesting thoughts!. I like how you write with no Caps, like "e!. e!. cummings!."

It seems you quite an anti-materialistic worldview!. Right on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Interesting concept!. You have some punctuation issues, though:

"the problem is in todays society we are forced to make things ours, homes, food, everything we need to survive is just given to us"
Should be 'the problem is, in today's society, we are forced to make things ours; homes, food, everything we need to survive is just given to us'



"its not our faults" should be 'it's not our fault'

"greed has become the downfall and in our world greed is a necessity to be happy"
Should be 'greed has become the downfall and in our world, greed is a necessity to be happy'

"and i not saying everyones evil and wrong" should be 'and i'm not saying everyone's evil and wrong'

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If nothing is yours then somebody would take it!. Or perhaps if no one had a sense of possession then people might start to use your things more than you like and it will start to eat away at you anyways which would lead to a form of unhappiness!. I doubt that society "forced" us to make things ours, its more so a part of human nature!.
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U have a point lol :)
Good job!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com