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Question: Please read my Romeo and Juliet essay!?
Topic: Romeo and Juliet, the "pair of star-crossed lovers" couldnt possibly be in love so suddenly!. They are impulsive and reckless, and only in love with the idea of love!. Discuss this in relation to the extract and the play as a whole!.

Please read the following essay!? And tell me what you thinkWww@QuestionHome@Com


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I think your essay was great!. The only thing I would change was the individual words that you put in quotes that weren't from the play-I'm pretty sure that you would put them in quotes like 'this' instead of "this!." For example, the word 'boyfriend!.' You would put it in 'these' quotes, not "these" quotes!.
One more thing- in the last paragraph, the first sentence, you still have to make it a complete sentence!. i know what you're going for there, the title-kind of look, but you can't title the last paragraph so you might want to fix that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice!. You presented your view well!. It is drama!. It wouldn't be Romeo and Juliet if they had been sensible and waited!.

However>>>> Neither of them took the time to learn about one another and were clearly very much in the heat of the moment when they chose to ignore their hearts and listen to their raging hormones instead>>>

Go read a few entries in Parenting Pregnancy under the adolescent thread!. _Nothing_ has changed Except we have better birth control and they still do not use it!.!. LOL!

Someday someone has to rewrite this with Juliet getting pregnant and not dead!. And Romeo trying to run off, but Mercutio stopping him and making him take his responsiblity!. However Mercutio get still gets killed by Juliet's hot headed brother!. Last scene is the court house, R&J are getting married, her brother is waiting to go to court, parents all flustered and upet!. hmmmmm!.!.!.maybe I will work on this!.

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It is good and very complete
the like the quotes but maybe your hook and conclusion could be a little more catchyWww@QuestionHome@Com