Need opinions on a poem ?

Question: Need opinions on a poem !?

I wake up
thinking about you every day
And hope it’ll work out
somehow, some way!.
you are so beautiful to me
if only you could see
how much i love you
maybe we were meant to be

(i need a middle part thats another thing i need help on)

i want you to know
all my heart could ever do
Is tell you that I’ll always LOVE YOU!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

As I wake up in the morning,
thinking about you every day;
hoping it'll work out,
somehow, some way!.

So beautiful,
that's what you are to me;
How much I love you,
I wish you could see!.

We were meant to be, that's one thing is so true;
What my heart could ever do, is to tell you I love you!.

--- You don't need a middle part here!.
The way you let it out will do the trick!.

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there isnt enough depth
words like love are used everyday you need to create imagary instead of telling me show me thorugh the words you use!.
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it's cute!.!.!.!. i can't think of a middle part sorryWww@QuestionHome@Com

Its cute, for what it is!. Pretty mediocre and cliche!.Www@QuestionHome@Com