Is it Worth reading?

Question: Is it Worth reading!?

Is it!.!.
http://www!.booksie!.com/young_adult/novel!.!.!.

I wrote it!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You've got a good start but it needs some edititing done on it!. One of the things I would suggest is to watch words like really and just!. The other thing is that it doesn't flow and was really hard to read!. But like I said you've got a good start but you need to clean it up before it's ready to show anybody!. To mean to sound harsh just giving you my honest opinion and I know first hand that critism isn't always easy to hear!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It didnt grab me!. And I dont know if a curse word is the best way to start off the opening sentence!. Maybe the reason why it didnt apeal to me so much is because it didnt seem to be in my favorite genre!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

omigosh you wrote that!!
that's really good
i love it lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

yeah i think its pretty good! i enjoyed reading it :DWww@QuestionHome@Com